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Applejack Shy scene - [No, Fluttershy isn't dead!]

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EDIT: Changed the title to reassure people. :p

Applejack dancing in circles with Winona whilst thinking of another.

I'm going to stop faffing about and call this done. Haven't done much but it's been sitting in my WIP despite being nearly finished in October... Fixed (or at least improved) some stuff people pointed out, including changing the floor. Not as great as I'd like it to be but my WIP folder needs some completion!

Also: I need good proofreaders for the story! Good enough to get it to the EquestriaDaily fic standards! [link] It's only short (about 2000 words per chapter, 5 chapters total, 4 now published), so if you know more than just how to spot a comma splice then help would be muchly appreciated! It's a romantic comedy (ew) focusing on Applejack's wish to date Fluttershy whilst the pegasus pony herself is on a dating (attempt) spree.
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>"Applejack Shy scene - [No, Fluttershy isn't dead!]"
>"Applejack dancing in circles with Winona"


Ah... I see. :nod:

Obviously, Winona is actually Fluttershy's future ghost send back in time and reincarnated, while her present-self is also still alive. :P

It makes sense! :lol: ;) ^^;