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Cadence the foalsitter by HareTrinity Cadence the foalsitter by HareTrinity
Part 1: [link]
Part 2: [link]
Part 3: (Here)
Part 4: [link]
Part 5: [link]
Part 6: [link]
Bonus comic! - [link]
Part 7: [link]
Part 8: [link]
Extra! - [link]
Part 9: [link]
Part 10 (END): [link]

Next part. Was going for a sketchy look but only really kept it up in the first panel, so now that bit just looks lazy... Oh well. I don't really want to spend too long on this story, everyone knows what happens in the end!

And yes, Shining's had his haircut, ready to properly train for the Canterlot guard!
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:icon1cosmiconsciousness:
1cosmiconsciousness Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2014
So that's what he would look with a buzz cut. I thought that was just for boot camp, where you're not allowed to leave for 2 weeks.
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HareTrinity Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Is it? It's one of the things I didn't research beforehand since it's just so associated with military stuff... ^^; Maybe Equestria has stricter rules since its citizens are so prone to luxurious flowing manes?
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1cosmiconsciousness Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2014
Oh, Bray-tish, I think I get.
Way out of your league.
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HareTrinity Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
The bad pun elite? =p 
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PrincipalCelestia Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014
Is Braytish like Brittish?
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HareTrinity Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
A bit more like British. ;)
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Kingofthecouch Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013
yes shining she is most deifinitly out of your league
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HareTrinity Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
(I wish there were a sad Shining plz account for me to reply to this comment with!) :p
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Kingofthecouch Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013
i like those 2 but come on everyone is out of cadence's league she is the freaking princess/goddess of love
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Zakhriisos1234 Featured By Owner May 26, 2013
Dat buzz cut
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RainbowDash3221XD Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
The buzzcut!
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Ddraigtanto Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Braytish? Interesting...
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HareTrinity Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I heard it elsewhere and took an instant liking to the pun. :)
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Because-Pinkie-Pie Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I thought up "Equinglish" for their language.
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Ddraigtanto Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I see. Fair enough. Well, makes sense: Great Braytan, capital: Buckingham; other cities: Trottingham, Buckpool, Coltchester, Canterbury, Fillypool and, of course, Derby.
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HareTrinity Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Not a bad little set of suggestions! :D
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Ddraigtanto Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much. :)
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DracoDei Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Not actually digging the haircut, given he doesn't have it later despite wearing a helmet, but maybe rank hath its privileges.
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freelancerraiko Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012
In reality she was using her magic to make him fall in love with her. >>
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ChaoticNote Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I thought that was Twily's dad until I saw the cutiemark. Then I just realized he had a buzz cut. It kinda suits him but I liked his original manestyle better.
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HareTrinity Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks. :) I gather a lot of people have found the haircut horrifying, but it does grow back! Mostly it's there because I'd had it mentioned in the first comic and wanted to emphasise he's in guard training.

I think it came out especially poorly in this comic... Ah well.
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ChaoticNote Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Did I mention I hate getting haircuts? So annoying. My dad has to go all the way to downtown Seattle just to get one. I never understood that.
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Nova225 Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012
''braytish'' ? ...really ?

Couldn't say ''Equestrian'' or ?
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:iconharetrinity:
HareTrinity Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I prefer the "it's like our world but full of ponies" view. :)
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Nova225 Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012
Well, yes, exactly, but in our world we ALSO have several versions of a same language (variations/dialects..)...

Like, English from Canada/USA/UK...

Here, it's 'Equestrian', which would be *their* variation of ''english'' in their country.
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Nova225 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012
>we don't even know if Equestria's the country or continent
-...are you serious there ? Really ? Haven't seen the episode... the map... the Internet ? It's kinda a wide-spreed information. -_-
[link] : It's like the USA, if it helps you...

Anyway... call 'pony-english' whatever you want.
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HareTrinity Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
We don't know it's "Equestrian", we don't even know if Equestria's the country or continent. We only have toy canon that it's one land mass. For all we know it might have several languages within. I hear more people call America's language "American English" than "American" anyway.

Of course, strictly speaking, British as a language is a form of Celtic and I'm not sure it's even spoken any more (unlike Scottish, Welsh and English), but Brayton, coming partially from "bray" (noise a donkey makes), has pun goodness.

That's my headcanon anyway.
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Nova225 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012
>we don't even know if Equestria's the country or continent
-...are you serious there ? Really ? Haven't seen the episode... the map... the Internet ? It's kinda a wide-spreed information. -_-
[link] : It's like the USA, if it helps you...

Anyway... call 'pony-english' whatever you want.
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HareTrinity Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
1) That's toy canon, it frequently differs from show canon (e.g. pink Celestia)

2) Since you used the example: Lots of people call the US "America" even though it's only part of it

3) Also as you're already talking about the US: There are over 300 languages spoken in the US (about half of which are native to it)

4) I will call it what I want to, and you're free to do the same :)

Seems "English" is more likely to become canon anyway, given that they've already mentioned "French" things.
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Nova225 Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2012
Adding one last thing here.

They have 'White Celestia' now : [link]
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fotland42 Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2012
Wow, Shining Armor looks terrible with a buzz cut.
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HareTrinity Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah, but I'd had that hinting at it in the first comic and wanted to emphasise he had training to do...
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iIsMe95 Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2012
Know that feel Shining. Pop a cold one? *Offers beer*
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sonicdude10 Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2012
I just happen to have a beer in hand ATM...

Want one Shining Armor? Mike's Hard Chocolate Cherry beer. Next best thing to hard cider.
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Darthmaul22 Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2012
That buzzcut looks weird. Just saying.
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HareTrinity Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
It didn't come out great, no, but I'd had that hinting at it in the first comic and wanted to emphasise he had training to do...
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LTblackcoat Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012
braytish a interesting pun there. (so far this is a interresting idea on "repairing" the holes in the cannon.)
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hgfggg Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2012
Yeah! The Cannon coolant is leaking out right now!
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LTblackcoat Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2012
:iconfillypinkieplz: it is preaty
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Chrismilesprower Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
This comic just gets better and better as I read it.
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HareTrinity Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:)
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Chrismilesprower Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
^_^ I sure wish I had an amazing foal sitter like Cadence.
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BB-K Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
In the military, it's always the hair will go away. :(
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dlazerous Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2012
I can testify to that from personal experience.
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BB-K Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
And it's a fact, I've seen it in my own country too, it's for discipline purpose.
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Alue26 Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2012
But isn't a recruit supposed to live on the base as long as the training goes?

I can understand that this is the last night before Shining goes to Advanced Training, but still...
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