On her mind

Another Applejack Shy scene and this time people probably won't think it includes Fluttershy dying! Lots of things I don't like about it (proportions, GAH), but feel like I shot myself in the foot with [link] since I think it's one of my best pieces ever but most people thought Fluttershy was dead and I suspect that explains why it's my least popular Equestria Daily submission so far. Sigh...

So yeah, this is me venting I guess. Story can still be seen here [link] and I still need a good proofreader.